I carry on...
bones re-invent themselves
mold to the breaking and
heal where they were left waiting
I am shaped oddly
but beautifully tragic
someday you will see this
yet you will look away quickly
and I will not be there when
you glance backwards
you will reach out with both lying hands
and only dust will greet you.
TO BE UTTERLY GONE!
I liked the bones re-invented - support systems and innovation - absolutely fine. Such economy - no word wasted. Emotionally congealed by selection of bits of emotion snipped from the memory to be shared with the world. - cool writing - Stella -
Such economy- no words
Such economy- no words wasted
I love that. It's absolutely brilliant. Thank you so much for reading and stopping by. I think you are my biggest fan by far, you're always there or you come back, you never forget about me. It does not go unnoticed. :) I hope you are well, or doing well at the least. Hugs lady A
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
Damn rabbits you sure know
Damn rabbits you sure know how to make a gal feel good! Just the fact that you actually come back and re-read my stuff honors me immensely. I don't see what you see in this one. But that's okay. That's what it's all about. I am glad it impacts you or anyone at all. :) that's all we can hope for is it not?
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
you know..
I thought maybe it was just the time I read it and this poem would maybe shift and be less impacting, but time has passed,feelings have changed and this poem still hits me in the gut like a fist!
Much Love
Ashley
Fucking love it. So glad I
Fucking love it. So glad I finally checked out your new work.
It is so good to see you
It is so good to see you back!
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
♡
♡
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
ahahha
I found words whilst posting it to fb
This poem makes me wish I could write like this! This poem makes me wonder if I've ever actually written a poem before...and I can't for the life of me put my finger on what makes it do this to me.. it just does!
Much Love
Ashley
and only dust will meet you...
I have no words which will do how this has sat in me justice...other than I have read it five times...
Much Love
Ashley
You're the best darling
You're the best darling
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.
beautifully written
and exhibiting great inner strength.
Thank you so much my friend
Thank you so much my friend
"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.