Like hands on flames
I touch, I pull back
I know better
This is what it is until it isn't
anymore
and I wonder
if you felt the heat
between us
and knew that it is different
than anything I
have felt in
an excruciating amount of time
or even care slightly
that you will burn me
like all the other flames before you
very nice!! it's deep and
very nice!! it's deep
and well-written
I love the subtle wordplay.
I love the subtle wordplay.
very nicely written
I enjoyed reading this alot ^_^
"Do not run away, for your shadow follows, reminding you of the darkness in your heart."
Tactile Write
About expectations and repetition, practical regret. - Well composed, this one. ~slc~