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He really thought you were something...
I really thought you were everything...
He thought you were a cool girl...
I thought you were queen of the world...
He thought you were that girl...
I thought you were the only girl...
He thought you pretty...
I thought you out of this world beautiful...
He said maybe we can hang out sometime...
I said do you have any time for me...
He said we could make this work...
I said this works for us...
You chose and who is to say what was right
He thinks your everything...
I think you could be something...
He thinks your the queen of the world...
I think your a somewhat cool girl...
He thinks your the only girl...
I think your that girl...
He thinks your beautiful....
I think your pretty ok...
He says this works for us...
I say it might have worked...
You chose and who is to say what was right...
Nice Motif
You walked us through the tribulations of the other lover, the competiton...well done. Some of this is too right to be detached, there's a love affair going on even if it is one sided...perhaps. Tantilizing, engagement then the withdrawal - romantic with the disease called new love - loved every word (except whos - who is or who's) - Lady A~~~~~~
thanks
Thanks for leaving a comment...and for the constructive criticism