Burning down the Void

Burned Bridges
empty spaces
a chaotic silence
remembering what life erases
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Mountain tops to climb
Battling the hurdles in your mind
Stuck in a clouded hell
Breaking down the walls that repel
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The writting on the walls
Transpiring messags in the stars
Creating Supernova's shaterring
The shallow eclipse of your mind

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broken alighment
death defiance
when you feel trapt in a lie
light up the sky

 

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Burning down the void:

 

I think your poem is very dramatic and you express and describe well. I like your poem.


 

 

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