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Burning Dawn
Always eclipsed by your everlasting beauty
Time slows.
Thoughts explode
Willpower falls
Bound by your solace presence
As our circles meet . Pieces fall into place
In your eye’s I see the truth concealed
in life’s great lie
Hairs stand up
Hands tremble
Heart races
You’re beauty paces
Forever this fight
as the sky’s falls into a mystical twilight
Our energy becomes the sparks of dusk
And our fears becomes the dust of dawn
Time turns intervals
as we follow this drum less beat
~Waiting until next time we meet~
Enchanted
Enchanted
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem
Almost Flawless
This poem is exquisite and lovely, but there are many spelling/grammar errors that need to be looked over to make this piece perfect. Overall, though, it's amazing.
Not sappy at all!
This is a well writter poem, with great use of language, beautiful imagery and flow. Well done!
Thank you!
Thank you!
This is truly a rare type of
This is truly a rare type of poem indeed to describe so well a situation with all the dimensions accounted for in beautiful and intimate language you certainly have talent sir, I enjoy most of your works very much. Great work! Cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks!
I'm glad you enjoyed it
I actually wrote this in like ten minutes haha
Love it!
I really love this poem! :D I like the fact that you describe the scenes so well.
Thanks you!=)
Thanks you!=)