[Sing to me, O Muse, of]
Failure to integrate
(various aspects of)
identity/memory/consciousness --
personality states
(Criterion A)
Too great to be
explained
[There is more than one of
me. Inside I am
many,
to survive] by
ordinary forgetfulness
(Criterion B)
The disturbance
[There has been
a domestic disturbance
in the quiet white house
across the street
from the school]
must involve
the characteristic symptoms
(Criterion C)
In rare instances
[a domestic disturbance
in the quiet white house]
the person
experiences dissociative states
[Inside,
there is more than one]
during which the event is
relived [over and
over and
over and]
recurrent and
intrusive
failure to integrate
(various aspects of)
[a domestic disturbance
in the quiet white house]
identity/memory/consciousness
following exposure to
an extreme
traumatic stressor
[I am
many, to survive.]
(Criterion D)
These poems are fine - whether or not they were part of a thesis - they stand out on their own.
kerry
http://kerrybrennan007.blogspot.ca
Thanks for the Evolutionary Details
But I agree with kerry, it stands emphatically on its own - I was diggin' it - from my college daze (yrs). Speaking in tongues is like "lecture speak" or "book writ" - I read & wrote up all that jargon and spiel and only use it when I read a poem like yours - Epistomology anyone? :D - be well ~~Lady A~~