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Been Better
Been Better
By Muriel Palanca
It’s been raining all day;
A different shade of gray to mark every hour,
Taste of spite and malice turn from bitter to sour.
Every ounce of feeling is amplified to nothing.
I wonder if the emptiness was better than feeling something.
good question
i think this is good. kind of relaxed flow. sounds spontaneous-not forced. It also has a lot of reads congrats. Check mine out I do not have the advantage of being as popular