The World Is Flat
By Muriel Palanca
The best part was the moment that
Line between restraint and wishful thinking
Became something like spider silk before the sun dried up the rain. A
Blurry boundary where my innocence could trespass
Between blank space and sturdy binding.
What is the wonder that keeps the stars from colliding? I never knew.
Is it the same force that made us
Real or was it just the street lamp that made everything appear hazy?
And what about love? Why does it
Make a dreamer who’s condemned to
Believe in the impossible, the improbable, the one and a better day? Who else
But a liar can see the truth most clearly and ignore it just the same?
If I could write a symphony from certainty
By mixing love notes, fragile hope and a first impression, I’d take a
Chance on double zero because I never really learned my lesson.
This is why the world is flat. I need a
Dream to be somewhere beyond the things I see.
Will you take me to the edge and pull me back? The fall was
Never kind when I reached the bottom, so it’s best if I stay right here. I’ll
Be next to you at the bus stop, waiting for something
More to surpass my expectations. Waiting for something better
Than another ordinary day. Waiting for
An answer to why we want what we can’t have. Can an
Illusion be enough to keep you warm at night?
Please tell me that I’m wrong because I’m almost never right.
Wake me from my fantasy and shake
Me from my reverie. I’ve given
Up on romantic delusions and a childish state of mind. I remain
So close to what I always wanted, but I always get left behind. Yet,
I believe there is an end to every circle. I believe I
Can almost touch the moon if I stand on my toes and stretch my fingers. And I believe that to
Watch cars go by in silence with someone you love is made sweeter by holding their hand.
The world is flat because the
Sunrise isn’t possible unless someone pulls it through the sky and the
One you love is just a stranger you saw as you were passing by. The
Last thing you should know is how much I didn’t say. I know
Time can span eternities and a second is all it takes.
With umbrella in hand I’ll take my leave and with it possibilities but
You can be a part of it if you get on the bus with me.
OMG where do I start? There
OMG where do I start? There were so many prolific moments in this pome love, I am taken back!
"The best part was the moment that
Line between restraint and wishful thinking
Became something like spider silk before the sun dried up the rain."
that is a mind blowing simile!
"Who else
But a liar can see the truth most clearly and ignore it just the same?"
I really wanna use this for a title if you don't mind! Its such a good line! It really resonates with me right now.
"This is why the world is flat. I need a
Dream to be somewhere beyond the things I see.
Will you take me to the edge and pull me back? "
I love the way this line is worded! You sound like you give all of yourself, like you embody passion, its so well written!
finally
"I know
Time can span eternities and a second is all it takes. "
Thse words are so wise it makes me happy!
I really REALLY enjoyed this poem!
thank you so much for posting it!
Much Love
Ashley
Thank you =)
Hello Ashley,
I apologize that it has taken me this long to get back to you. I don't check this site very often anymore.
Your comments were very touching and I am truly honored to have your praise. I read some of your stuff as well and you are quite marvelous yourself!!
I wish you all the best and thanks again for seeing beauty in my work.
Much love,
Muriel