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YOU Let IT go SON!
YOU let IT go SON!
Looks are imposters that deceive the lights of tomorrow
A burden to the present closing all other open doors
Unveil the” pretty” look inside, IT’s full of grief and sorrow.
Have common sense, SON. Look beyond that “pretty” sight
Count all the goods in IT sit-down and make that list.
Can YOU come up with anything worth fighting for?
Is IT worth that fraction second of YOUR time? Does IT matter?
Fool YOU are, chasing after the wind
YOU are looking at beautiful art and pretending IT really exists
YOU don’t matter to IT can’t u see IT?
Choosing YOU so YOU can fill in ITS useless time
Chosen so IT will feed on your blind-love driven deeds
Blind-love driven energy, moral supports and currency
So mean to let go because IT’s self-centered
Pretends and fake touches to calm YOUR pride.
Revolving around as long as YOU are willing to provide
Pitiful, YOU are blinded by the cover, painted with eye grasping colors
Ignoring all the blank and non-sense stories printed on each pages
Why are YOU here SON? Why are YOU here? Why? SON why???
Don’t YOU hear YOUR common sense and guts telling YOU to let go and run?
Doesn’t YOUR heart tell YOU it has been broken over and over again?
Haven’t YOUR eyes gazed thru enough pretend laughs and conversations?
Haven’t YOUR ears heard enough stories that has no base or thoughts?
Haven’t YOUR legs walked miles of tiresome trips to nowhere?
Haven’t YOUR hands supported and lifted enough heavy boxes full of crap?
Haven’t YOUR mind taken enough voyages for a later disappointments?
Haven’t YOU dreamed enough about a happier ending but there is none?
Haven’t YOU witnessed countless disappointing and heartbreaking good byes?
Haven’t YOU spent enough long and lonely nights, full of longing?
Haven’t YOU gotten stabbed with enough uncertain thoughts?
Don’t YOU feel used?
Haven’t I suffered enough about YOUR non-sense, SON?
Why then SON? What is in IT? Why do even bother to look that way?
Didn’t I miss YOUR laughs YOUR good old self YOUR common sense?
…. Let go
…let IT go
… Let IT go SON!!
There is something better!!! YOU deserve better SON!!!
YOU have a promising life ahead of YOU, SON, Let go SELF, let IT go, let HER go!!!
Outside beauty is all she has for you have seen there is nothing inside her!
i like both the poem itself
i like both the poem itself and the feeling behind it, well done son
I'm sorry i wasn't who you thought i was. F**k it, i'm sorry i wasn't who i thought i was.
...I bought the heartbreak hotel on my own with no investors, closed it down and opened the F**k you, get over it bed and breakfast
It came from the heart. I
It came from the heart. I wrote it out of hate, love and lots of mixed emotions. It's like I am a kid dealing with a candy caged inside a glass case. Life should be easy love should be easy!!
Thank You for your time!!
amazing read
and just even better if it's said aloud - the capitals are a device here you've used very well, great work keep it up
Thank You, Mr. Deepblue
Thank You, Mr. Deepblue