I stand
I wait
I glance
I contemplate
I love
I cry
you say
goodbye
I cry
you shrug
I wanted
you
so much
you used
and abused
me
broke into
me
brainwashed
and shrivled
you left
me there
upon
the stair
without
a care
I'm without
a care
I'm dry
I'll say
goodbye
to this
world below
I'll never
show
them what's
within
I stand
I wait
I glance
but never
contemplate...
You changed you writting
You changed you writting style in this one. It sounds good. None of the rhymes sound forced. I like it.
know how you feel. i like the format of this, its neat.
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