I Jump

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I stand

I wait

I glance

I contemplate

I love

I cry

you say

goodbye

I cry

you shrug

I wanted

you

so much

you used

and abused

me

broke into

me

brainwashed

and shrivled

you left

me there

upon

the stair

without

a care

I'm without

a care

I'm dry

I'll say

goodbye

to this

world below

I'll never

show

them what's

within

I stand

I wait

I glance

but never

contemplate...


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vipervenomnu's picture

You changed you writting

You changed you writting style in this one. It sounds good. None of the rhymes sound forced. I like it.

Ashley Sanford's picture

know how you feel. i like the format of this, its neat.

ash