I swear that the blood inside of me
Is glowing exponentially
And nothing is the same
Because it’s all a game
And I’ll laugh until the end
My eyes will see the world
Pick pieces and make swords
And yell and scream
Cause life’s a dream
And I’ll dance till the end
Love I see unconventionally
Hearts abound especially
Hate looks like mould
Life can be cold
And that’s why I cry sometimes
I am like a Dali painting
People come to watch me fainting
I’d like to feel
When life’s surreal
And I’ll talk to the end
Electronic voltage shocks
Explodes from my chicken pox
It makes me giddy, dance around
Because I hear it’s every sound
And I’ll laugh at the end
I’ll laugh at the end
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well done a great love and lovely poem..mean it that this is a very good poem and like it much...your poetry is rich and inspiring too..hope you add more poems to enjoy... and wish if you go through my poems too... I am basically a peace dreamer and peacew wisher poet with 6 books and believe in love for all and peaceful world... let me share with you one of my owns says regarding peaceful life...(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq )) hope we save the ailing world with our love poems... for ensuring the peace
well... this is a great poem with impressive meanings and of course the way you did is also attractive... means you have much capability to write good poems... and hope you will never stop writing poems in the same loving way... your comments on my poems are well come...and hope you will let me know through you best comments, hiw is my work ..is that knocking your heart? I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and dream for peace....let me share one of my own says with you regarding love based peace....(( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq ))... hope we can medicate the ailing society with lovely poems of love based peace....