Drowning rain
It blinds vision
Deafens hearing
mutes voices
drowns out feeling
they walk hand in hand
she's smiling
as water soaks her hair
he wonders how
on a day like this
she can be so happy
she sings a soothing lullaby of osng
he is comforted
but not saved
"i love the sun"
she whispers in his ear ever so softly
he wonders and asks
"how can u love the sun, its not even out"
she smiles
"you are my sunshine"
they both blush
their hands find eachother
as they walk hand in hand
the rain stops...
In such a vast sea of words, it is impeccable that you manage to keep all your ideas and meanings intact. Thoroughly enjoyable and memorable