This Ring

I found comfort with this ring,
Peace as I hear my soul sing;
An eternity of song for you  and I,
Every time I feel you nearby.

 

Nothing compares to how much,
I get electrified by a single touch;
Even when you are not around,
You are in this ring to I am bound.

 

This ring is my profession of our love,
This ring is my protection from above,
I commit to you again as a year’s past;
Vow to you and God, assured to last.

 

… with this ring.

 

There is pleasure when we trust,
Being together in prayer saved us;
So overblessed for you to be mine,
A rib only God set out for me to find.

 

The favor of God covers us both,
Through journeys of marital growth;
We are rejoice today without cursory,
Because God gave us an anniversary.

 

This ring is my profession of our love,
This ring is my protection from above,
I commit to you again as a year’s past;
Vow to you and God, assured to last.

 

… with this ring.

 

Happy Anniversary.

 

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ramonathompsont's picture

Beaufial, but sadly enough a

Beaufial, but sadly enough a ring either isn't enough to hold 2 people together or it keeps someone you love from you because they belong to someone else. 

1SP's picture

Sweetheart, the ring is

Sweetheart, the ring is material... it is worldly. The symbolic to the one flesh spouses are to become together. The union should be more spiritual than anything. The commitment is not held by the ring, but isheld by God. That was the message, sweetie.

passionate_poet's picture

beautiful

Oh wow when I read this poem I could feel your dedication and love for your wife.

I wish you both every happiness and may the years ahead be blissful for you both,

xox

1SP's picture

Thank you

That was nice I was married... the feeling of connection. Through commitment, trust, and communication, but without faith we had nothing. Our marriage headed for destruction so abruptly. Marriage takes work and faith without works is dead. So faith is indeed the forefront of a marriage. I should write one more poem for this reason. Thank you for your critique.