It was dark and stormy. Scary weather that followed my mood. Pathetic fallacy I know but the time had come where the act was destined. I walk into the kitchen, grab the knife and started chopping. Swing, Hack, Dice, Chop. I have always dreaded carving raw meat. Who would have thought that I would be here, now , covering up this dreadful crime. There! Now I throw all the pieces in the pot and boil the flesh off the bones. Next step, bury all the incriminating evidence. No one will ever know I am a murderer if there is no evidence to prove it. I look down at my hands, my stomach churns at the sight of blood. How will I ever sleep again with blood on my hands? My God what have I done! I have literally cut my best friend in a million pieces. I cannot stand this anymore. The blood is everywhere. I do not deserve to live after the horror I have inflicted. *Grable the knife* Oh cruel and hopeless world how can you betray me like this. *Slits wrists.* Who knew dying would feel like this. The next morning discovery was made of the girl dead on the floor, with a pile of beef on the table next to her.
Very graphic...
This piece is glorious! You grab the attention of your reader very quickly and never let go. And the way you ended the story was done very very well. It reminds me a lot of the Tell Tale Heart.
there is something seriously wrong with you! lol.. i think your delve into dark humor is a success