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Watering My Garden
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deliberate symmetry
Watering My Garden
pouring dreams
upon the landscape
of my life
reviving
parched moments and broken days
with tomorrow’s hope
© LadyRaine
This poem reminds me of the
This poem reminds me of the so-called "water dripping" lines of the fifth section of T. S. Eliot's poem, The Waste Land. He considered those particular lines to be the finest in the poem, but, in a much smaller space, you have said just as much as he did in that whole section, and you havd said it as well.
Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]
Thank you for your
Thank you for your thoughts,
I am truly touched...