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THE EVIL WITCHES
The witches are brewing I know something
And from all over the world, now they're coming,
And they're as happy as they can be
This's their favorite night, and they can do anything.
They're brewing for you, double, double trouble,
With all kind of potions,bat wings and lizards and all kind of troubles they bring
As they're wishing for only, only double disaster
And they're mixing their brew and sing to their, Darkmaster!
The title alone does state "evil witches" but then the first line indicates that she's refering to all witches:
"The witches are brewing I know something.."
I no longer find it all that offensive, poems such as these and I have indeed seen worse ones about Witches and the Wiccan religion (i'm wiccan) but WE DO NOT WORSHIP THE DARKMASTER!! OR SATAN OR ANY OTHER FORM OF IT OR HIM!! ok i'm done now.....
The title of Your poem explains that these are "evil" witches, and therefore i think it is well written. If You had said all witches, then i think You would have been wrong. As it stands, it is fine! please check out my stuff, also i have 3 books available through bn.com/amazon.com under the name Corey Evan Fox
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I am also pagan & in spite of the recent comment, I did not find this offensive. I can see that this was written merely to be fun & for children.
Darkmaster may be a slightly bit heavy for this poem, but still the intentions were clear.
Keep up the good work.
Amy
Gentle is the night♥
I've been a member of this site for a few years now and I've recently got your poem as one of the daily poems. I must say, I'm Pagan, and I found your poem very offensive and very hollywood. REAL witches do not sit around a culdren and make up spells to curse the world. Most of them are VERY nice and only wish good things. There is a very small % of witches that are bad, and we DO NOT worship the devil or some "Darkmaster" as you say in your poem. I think it is cruel of you to pass those judgements when you dont know anything about their beliefs.
If you intended your poem to be more light hearted and in the spirit of Halloween I suggest that you re-write your poem and make it more clear to the reader. As it stands, its offensive, rude and ignorant to anyone under Pagan/wiccan belief and I took great offense to it.
That's cool loved it very imaginative Thanks regards Michelle