Infinite the waves rising and lapping
To the washed away waters upon the shores
Iradescent glowing seashells crowning
With beauty the sands that once I walked on.
Over the misterious skies all the warm colors
Like fireworks lit and well displayed
Red and oranges meeting playfully the
Purples and blues in magical delight.
Far away the waves crashing in fancy fashion
So happy like a thunderous big laughter
Forever go kissing the glorious sunset
Back and forth waving and saying their goodbye.
LadyDP2000
copyright@2001
i must say i agree with everyone else's comments. whenever anyone speaks about the ocean my ears perk up.
just closing my eyes the visions are a great magnitude, I love the man and beast of nature. keep up the good work
Oh well, Dorian...u know me. Any poems with a childlike quality will surely go down well with me... Just like this one~!~! WOowow...great personification~! Particularly the last stanza...the laughter and saying goodbyes... Superb imagery~! :@) Keep it up, my lady~!
I think I am in love with this poem! The ocean is one of my favorite topics! You gave an excellent rendition here!