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WINTER
~Winter~(1)
As the days of Winter
Start slowly to fall,and
Gather one by one upon the
Toptrees,
All the brown, decaying leaves,
Start soon one by one, to fade.
Parting away with a sad and passionate
kiss,
The sunrise and the sunset,give away
Their night's secrets,to the new
Day that shyly just comes out.
As they say goodbye wrapped into each other,
With many tears
As sadly they go paying tribute to the
King sun,
And as they blend each other into one,they pray,
Waiting anxiously for the next one
Soon to come.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2000
My dear friend Dorian , I have always enjoyed watching the seasons change. At the approach of winter, I have always had a sad feeling... something I can't explain ! You have penned my feelings very well here, drawing up those feelings that I always get. Your poems always bring emotional responses too me ... That's what makes you so dear ! God bless you Peace and love to you my dear friend ~~~~ Dougie ~~~
Dorian, Such a romantic portrait of nature, you've painted here. Nice easy reading... Love you,
Dorian, This is a excellent description of Winter,not my favorite season,but a good poem. Floreann
A very nice poem.... and the images are striking.
Dear Dorian, Hi! I like very much. You are good. Bye! Teresa
Nice personification...good imagry