I watched
as you satisfy
your craving
for anything insipid
to ingest.
You find joy
in a breakfast
of crushed chalk
spread between
two crumpled papers,
washing them down
with stale pen inks.
You find bliss
in a lunch
of pickled pebbles
and pungent soil
followed by an ounce
of fresh piddle.
You find euphoria
in a dinner
of tiny rust
and cold metal
finishing it off
with rancid acid.
You wondered:
why your throat is inflamed,
your chest in pain,
and worms
dwell inside you.
I wondered:
how you survived
while I slowly died
watching.
Your poetry has that delicate touch what I like to call the human condition. The words exude truth. There is too much to analysis, to me it is the "creative nature". I love to participate in a great poem the strength of the poem is that it moved me to comment on it!
Personally, I found this poem got better and better the more times I read it.
peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
Hi Dylan, thanks for the comment :)