I look through the veil of velvet red
Longing, lust, passion fuse us as one
My thoughts forever locked on you
My heart forever set
A dream of unparalleled beauty
For no language can describe
The warm embrace of you enveloped my life
The fiery light of caution flickers from beyond
I wake from the utopia unable to move
False familiars preach prophecy of chaos and ruin
My mind is a wreck for I barely sleep
Unforeseen thoughts envelop me whole
Little did I know what would result
The malevolent seeds were implanted in me
My mind stranded in an ocean of honey
Opinions are stated
A decision is dictated
My true feelings voided by logic's cold command
The inevitable end brought on by my so called friend
For reasons I cannot understand
The hand of he defaces what was
Shattered dreams with a soul crushing finality
What hope remains goes up inflames
Striped cheeks and endless critiques
From the ashes of my heart
A husk
A shell
For what is left I cannot tell
Life goes on without my dear girl
Sadness is all I feel
For life its self is devoid of happiness
True insight only came after calamity
What have I done to you my beloved one
I have destroyed our sacred bond
My friend and my lover
My last endeavor
A mask of pain is all that remains
For what I have lost I can never reclaim.
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