Shrouded by the gentle murmur,
Of raindrops falling to break,
Upon the straw-thatched roof you join me under,
Patiently we wait.
I look upon you and wonder,
If I asked...
Would you stay?
Here behind the drawn curtains,
A veil water glassy.
And now,
As the ripples die,
The pitter-patter turns to silence,
You wake, turning to leave,
And I whisper...
I got chills from this
I got chills from this one.
Very well.
Can't take all the credit
It's inspired by a japanese animated film titled "Garden of Words/Kotoniha no Niwa". You might enjoy it if you liked this. Well.. assuming I accurately conveyed the movie's tone.
Quite beautiful and sensual
Quite beautiful and sensual without descending into the tawdry.
Starward
I do try my best. I
I do try my best. I want to write more romance but it only comes to me rarely