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(Haiku is a non-rhyming poem of 5-7-5 syllables)



upon shifting sands

undulations under foot

balancing forces

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©14 November 2008 - 9:53pm — kj1
15 November 2008 - 3:41pm — Starward-Led
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Now THAT is a perfect Haiku!

Starward-Led

26 November 2008 - 8:50pm — Kelly Burbank (not verified)
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thank you for your comment. Your's are good as well.