STILL LAKE.

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NATURE

Deep alpine, cool lacustrine

emerald chameleon

in whose arms lies

the mirrored skies,

an ever changing ceiling.

Around the lake small ripples break

amongst the swaying reeds.

Hem of its shores, they grow in scores,

a mass of water weeds.



The sun seems dead as overhead

deep blankets spun of mist

laid neath his feet deflect his heat,

his solar rays resist.

A sombre day of weary gray

peers down with brooding face.

The still lake its reflections make,

heaven's contours trace.



Then thick clouds part. A stabbing dart

of gold streaks through the skies.

Straight as an arrow through the narrow

vapour tunnel flies

a golden beam, a molten stream

borne by an aerial porter.

The burnished light that glances bright

dances on the water.

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Karyn Indursky's picture

I'm flattered to have read such brilliance. Your images are vivid to the point of me feeling as though I'm there. I can hear, see, touch, taste, feel the beauty of my surrounding with your every word adding more sensory information than the typical writer. I'm glad you make it come alive and give me a sacred haven in your wonderful poetic masterpiece.