Onwards, ever onwards to meet the billowed tide,
Its waters flowing, heedles, no matter what betide,
The river ripples, timeless; from age to age endures;
Rushing onwards, onwards towards the ocean's shores.
Through lazy, sweltering summer its surging pace is slackened.
In winter's stormy tempest its flooded waters blackened.
Its store of floating debris churns and twists and wheels.
Its muddy, stony bottom harbours salmon, trout and eels.
Framed between its grassy banks it mirrors each new day.
Swirling streams and eddies its whispering music play.
The ever steadfast willow stands sentry on its banks
Eyeing gravely, stolidly, the laughing river's pranks.
Sometimes it ripples quietly, its peace and charm exude,
Then changes with the storm-clouds to angry, sullen mood.
Its furious waters froth and foam like cauldrons on the boil
Till urgently burst from its banks to flood surrounding soil.
Then,when the heavens quieten, the water slow subsides,
Shrinks once more into its banks, into its boundaries slides;
Resumes its usual endless course toward its destiny....
Flowing ever onwards, onwards to the sea.
This poem has a different element with your language usage. You have mixed old English into it. Most people would struggle to do this, but you don't and it's very effective in displaying underlying emotions.
that is an amazing poem
i wish my first poem was a forth as good as that
you have a wonderful way with words!
ash
Much Love
Ashley