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Goodbye Love
Brian, the days we've spent together
Were the kind I'll never spend with another
You brought me happiness far beyond end
Once we became more than "just friends"
I realize in Texas you have another life
But admit - when you're with me
you can't think of your wife
I gave you my heart, body and soul
Being with you through life was my ultimate goal
Knowing you're leaving fills my body with sorrow
Without you here, I'll have no tomorrow
You'll never forget me, there's no doubt in my mind
Just look at the memories we've left behind!
So I guess it's time to say goodbye
All that's left to give is a tear and a sigh.
love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poet and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq
awesome work
on this one .
Beautifal and sad. It's wonderful how you can get into her soul and express how SHE felt through your PEN. I wanted to thank you...you left a comment a long, long time ago for one of my poems, "no matter how far" , i never thanked you for letting me know that I made you feel closer to someone..after all, isn't that the ultimate goal? Thanks again, keep writing... Lauren
Trust this, my dear, if one thing is true, it is that they NEVER leave their wives.
It is both heartwrenching and masterful of u to delve into the mind of your friend and write the way her soul feels... Definitely a sorrowful poem indeed, Stephanie. A love triangle is destructive...and often,leaves everyone in pain and grief. I hope u can read my poem Star, Forest, Rain. It deals with this theme too. thanxs.
Oh my! Unrequieted love...it is sad and tragic. And you expressed it so eloquently. Bravo!