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perhaps i will just drown my feelings in wine

I want
You to drown in me.

 

I want us

to drown in the summer

to drown in the snow of the next winter

to drown in the warm, effortless feelings.

 

I want to drown

in this bed

in your bed

in your hair

in your words. 


If you don't

want to drown with me

I want to drown myself.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This worked better in my native language Finnish, but I still wanted to share it. Here's the original version (written last year):

 

Haluan

että hukut minuun.

Haluan

että hukumme ensi kesään

ja ensitalven lumeen

ja mereen.

Haluan hukkua

tähän sänkyyn

sinun sänkyysi

hiuksiisi

sanoihisi.

Jos sinä et

halua hukkua,

haluan hukuttautua.

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©3 March 2013 - 11:20am — kitty-cat
22 April 2013 - 1:52pm — 9inety
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either way

works for me,

although, I pefer Jamison and Guinness to wine,

CHEERS!

Peace

Dylan

"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

22 April 2013 - 2:09pm — kitty-cat
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I actually prefer something

I actually prefer something else to wine also but I like using wine as a 'symbol' on my poems :) Thanks for the comment!

22 April 2013 - 2:14pm — 9inety
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I just

like getting blotto

 

it keeps me grounded

 

it doesn't need any sybolism...

 

Peace

Dylan

"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

22 April 2013 - 2:15pm — 9inety
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I am

blotto

right now!

over and out

"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot