Lost in this world
with nowhere to go
everything is gray
its all fading away
abandoning me
leaving me alone
clerly put out and shown
walk the path
but unable to avoid rocks
the sharp sticks poking me
telling me im no longer free
becoming an adult sounded fun
but then I opended my eyes
and I realized we are but a lie
barley alive, clinging they all try
but in the end they will fall
it doesnt matter how tall
we are weak, and over emotional
we take things for granted
we take risks
to only lose it all
I don't know what to say besides Damn...I see a little influence of my work in there, but im not one hundred percent sure about it. I see a little bit of fading away and shadow of death in this one...You got a good bit of potential man. I love this stuff. Im posting my new stuff like NOW.