Painting on the wall, tell me what you mean
With those hypnotizing colors, dark blues and forest greens
I see you tell a story, by the dancing winds and standing tree
The dead grass, full moon and the night?s mysterious breeze
Your tree casts a shadow, and falls upon the grass
Forming a skeleton like hand, with sharp ends like broken glass
I do not understand what all of this demands
Such complicated painting, painted by simple shaping hands
You try to tell me something, I can assure that is your chore
By the way I stopped in the hall, to admire your living soul
Represented in the painting, by the colors and hidden fears
And the troubling mystical meaning, I find nowhere clear
I walked two steps closer, and faced the painting with a frown
Then I realized I had known what the painting was about
I knew it all along, but expected something strong
Like a dream or fancy story, yet I was right nor wrong
To my eyes this painting meant, nature?s dark form and shape
Perhaps a night outdoors, or a somber land scape
Well now I shall conclude, my nightly visits through these halls
I?ll stroll again tomorrow, when I hear a painting call.
Wow, wow and wow. Heck, not even those words can describe how strong and amazing that poem was Karla. I really loved it. You put so much light, strength and imagination on the painting and that worked out perfectly. The topic was simply one of the best I've ever read and I just can't bring myself to criticize your poems! They're just too good! Noone can write a poem as good as you can Karla. You're a professional. Astronomical job!