Harpoon

They watch me, they hate me, they want me to fail

Harpooning my sailboat before it sets sail

 

The rain is pouring, the clouds are black

The harbours fading, no turning back

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sweetwater's picture

Very nice I really enjoyed

Very nice I really enjoyed reading this. Sue.

kirkman's picture

Thank you for reading

Thank you for your comment sue, I intend now to view your matertial. Looking forward to it.

Not many people understand the way I write, but I have written something I would love to have your opinion on. In the rant and rave section of this site I decided to post the first three chapters of my first novel. I would love you to view it if you have the time and hear your honest opinion, whatever it may be. If you like it then I might be able to put it on kindle or something.