Differently

 

 

 

 

 

From my vantage point

I see it Differently

Than you.

 

When you say

That I just happened

To come back

 

Everyday

Without you

I thought

 

But I am not the One  .

You know the One  ?

The One  !

 

That went away .

 

How I see it

From my vantage point

Is Differently

 

Than You.

 

KS

 

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

2/14/15

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JulxeMadxson's picture

I love this poem, by the

I love this poem, by the comments I am not sure if you are thowing shade at me, either way you're a great writer. 


Madison 

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First off : Thanx

It was all good

I was just using you for my muse

For the day.

I hope you dont mind.

Shade ?  Ive been told I am pretty damn cool.

How much shade you need  ? Lol

KS

You were the One that went away

In my metaphoric world.

Edited

* Plus , the last line hints at I might

Of found someone new.

And you probably see my emphasizing the one

As not being me and maybe you left me

For someone else.

I dont usually explain my poems

But maybe that is what you seen

And the reason you liked it.

JulxeMadxson's picture

Well I do love it, it's a

Well I do love it, it's a great poem. I understand now.


Madison 

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Julxe

You did inspire the poem

Right after I read yours.

But I was a little worried

That you might think

"  I was throwing shade at you  "

Haha  ( i like that  )

But Us worrying all the time

Is what crushes are artistic

Or even inventive attributes.

Thank you for taking the time to like.

Even if it was  "  Differently  ".

( for a moment )

And I Do see it your way

Too.

KS

jg439271's picture

wow love this!!! Nice work!

wow love this!!! Nice work! :)


Matthew 7:14

The Narrow Gate

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Glad you like it

They DO mean something

When I write them.

KS

( at least to me )

mrpoofs's picture

Aw man I feel this, I think.

Aw man I feel this, I think. Its always different

KindredSpirit's picture

You know it Bro

KS