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The Unknowns
Many guests
But no takers.
They fool around
With you.
Don't want to claim you
For their own
They fool around
With you.
They don't know
No better.
They can't believe
Their eyes.
Their lying eyes Want to
Fool around
With you.
KS
Who they be foolin' ?
Many guests
But no takers.
Repetitious
Don't you think ?
They fool around with you .
Well,let, well, we'll, this
Well, well, well, this says it all, says it all, says it all perfectly! Great Well contained poem which brings the reader through the monotony and disillusioning cycle of broken hopes. awesome! Hugs
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanks my smoothness
For bringing love
And Hugss to the party.
KS
Unless your _________
Let's say ranting.
I be hanging out
Over there
Haha
Enjoyed this very much, I
Enjoyed this very much, I liked the way you have set it out, and the way it flows. Also it is very clever, using repetition like this. Very good poem Sue.
Thank you
For your Sweetness.
KS