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Blown Away
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They Are Out There
Someone
Bit the Bullet
Today.
Fairy Tales
And the Dust
Got Blown Away.
Somebody
Bit the Bullet
Today.
KS
11/13/15
Friday
Someone
Bit the Bullet
Today.
Fairy Tales
And the Dust
Got Blown Away.
Somebody
Bit the Bullet
Today.
KS
11/13/15
Friday
Good minimalism
This is really powerful for the minimalist style. I can feel confusion and the somberness in a really good way, especially considering the recent attack.
The confusion might be
On the part of someone else.
I Am Not Confused !
The minimalism does say what I wanted to say.
I tend to go on at times
Which tends to change the meaning
From line to line.
When maybe I shouldn't.
But thanks for the like and you did have the mood right
And the cadence when you read it.
A lot about poetry or music has to do with the cadence
And in music the arrangement.
My two cents.
KS