Blown Away

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They Are Out There

 

 

 

 

 

Someone


Bit the Bullet


Today.


Fairy Tales


And the Dust


Got Blown Away.


Somebody


Bit the Bullet


Today.



KS

11/13/15

Friday

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

11/13/15

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Lesdeuxanes's picture

Good minimalism

This is really powerful for the minimalist style. I can feel confusion and the somberness in a really good way, especially considering the recent attack. 

KindredSpirit's picture

The confusion might be

On the part of someone else.

I Am Not Confused !

The minimalism does say what I wanted to say.

I tend to go on at times

Which tends to change the meaning

From line to line.

When maybe I shouldn't.

But thanks for the like and you did have the mood right

And the cadence when you read it.

A lot about poetry or music has to do with the cadence

And in music the arrangement.

My two cents.

KS