Something I Hate

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All set on writing something that I hate

Like some kind of crazy debate

With myself to write-out the hate.

Like if I had a hammer

And I could go around the world like Pete Seeger

Hammering out everything that I don't like

Before I get hammered out

Living at the bar of no return it should be an easy thing to do

Knowing I can't come back anyways

I'm already missing the one that got away

Cuz I was thinking about her the other day

When I should of been fishing instead

 

 KS

 

10/20/15

 

Just thinking about her

And everything she said

I might change my mind

And let the season that we had remain the same

Change my mind

Instead

Instead

Instead

 

I started to write about something that I would hate

And now

I can't decide

What I really

Want to do.

All set in writing

Out the hate

And I end up

In Dilemma City

With that hammer

In my hand.

 

 

10/21/15

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and_hera_met_zeus's picture

great write!!

sucks that ur stuck in that dilemma tho.  :(  

 

side note:

what do u fish for?  (since i'm in the midwest too, but i don't fish around here very much cuz i don't know the fish that well... i'm from texas n used to fish the ocean all the time).

KindredSpirit's picture

Thanx so much

I wanted to write a terrible poem

And just give up and go away.

But a new day wouldn't let me

Make it really really bad.

I like your input anytime .

Fishing....  I wish I lived by you.

I would take you if you would want to go.

I'll tell you about fishing some other time.

KS

You seemed like a Midwest girl

But then my Brother lives in Illinois

And told me today about a lot of girls

Being kinda " uppity up " around where he lives.

( don't take it the wrong way )

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

nah

i'm from texas, i just live in illinois now.

KindredSpirit's picture

I had a great time

When I was young fishing in the ocean.

We would go to Naples and stay at a place

That was a bait shop.

Talk about an experience.

The two boys would go out at night with the

Bait boat with nets.

They didn' t like them Electric eels to say the least.

KS

I went with them sometimes.

Me and my uncle and dad would go out during the day.