Your Society

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Your Society

( the short version )

 

 

The majority has become

A shallow hole of nothingness

That holds in high reguards

 

The weakness of the workings

Of them who leave a scar

 

In funny desperation

Laughing to the bank

 

Rolling dough

in cookie cutter shows.

 

 

Selling sex

 

 

To a populice:

 

 

Squeezing

into

them  spanx

 

 

KS

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Everythings a funny.

Like another beltline mouthin' joke.

9/2/15

6:58 AM

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The edited version is

It was going to be about all the lame-*** jokes

About sex on television and why I can't stand 

To watch that garbage.

And how I pity the kids that have to grow-up

With it all and what the hell it will all lead too.

The scar is on the Brains of the consumers of said garbage and how a lot of people will watch the mush.

Oh well, it was just a rant about greasy palms

And sex sells.

I guess?

Until you get sick of the same old corny ass jokes

Like me.

KS

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Follow-up

I am not a prude
And I did not have sex with that woman.
I have always liked sex for various reasons
But I was married for a long time.
But like I said I liked it before that.
Just sayin.
This poem was about any show or movie
That a warped mind makes
( even for kids )
They have to joke about anything
That their little mind thinks is funny.
It just proves ( to me )
That they do have a small mind.
KS
The rant goes on

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My Society

made of mostly blood relations

scattered as wind tossed confettii pieces

surviving in spite of the bad luck

and health issues.

.

constructed of little old men

and little old women who exercise

with friends and dogs and are exceptionaly

happy in their designer sports gear.

.

the holes are full of old photos

and nothingness has potential.

.

Lady A

09-01-15

303p

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I will try to explain

This one.

Because reading it now it comes across to me

As a half-baked rant. Haha

And I wrote it !

Later

KS