You are Right
I Love you
Through all the fears
I Love you
When empty
Love appears
But we fear
All the fears
Even when we say
We don't fear
And Love runs away
From the fear
Of the fear
That someone
Will pick it up
And make it worse
How true! Nice format too!
How true! Nice format too!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thanx Smoothie
I almost want to break that
Last line away in the first stanza.
But people can read it how
They want to.
Kinda like Love.
KS
No it reads perfect break it
No it reads perfect break it away and it will change the flow . Great job!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."