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To Friends and dreamlovers Someday we'll find that moonlit lake
while were sitting under that tree
I wont give up looking for it
if you dont give up on me
I'll caress your pale lit face
and gaze into your starbright eyes
that will be our perfect moment
our first kiss, lips that tell no lies
Lets end our dream the way we want
write these last few moments down on stone
then keep on searching for this hope
hold onto my hand, i wont let u go alone
I rememeber when you wrote this...and just rereading it reminds me of how much i cared for you and still do...but it also reminds me of how good it felt when you told me you loved me and i believed you and how bad it hurt when you broke up with me...and all the emotions i felt and things i said to you that i regret...
this poem is so sweet
I liked everything about this (especially the star and moon stuff) except the last line
"hold onto my hand, i wont let u go alone"
how about..."hold my hand and you'll never be alone"
Just an idea. Beautiful James. So tender :)
James I love this poem...you know i do.....everything
about it is so sweet and beautiful!! I Love You!! and I'll
Talk to you later!!*hugs* Jewel
this is awesome james!! i truly love it. its so emotional and deep and i can tell it comes straight from the heart, etc. talk to u onlines. luvs ya ~ maryboo
hey this is really good! ill talk to you later (hopefully) love you 10 times more then anything you say! (even though you will never think i do) Jenn Jenn