Our dream

Someday we'll find that moonlit lake

while were sitting under that tree

I wont give up looking for it

if you dont give up on me



I'll caress your pale lit face

and gaze into your starbright eyes

that will be our perfect moment

our first kiss, lips that tell no lies



Lets end our dream the way we want

write these last few moments down on stone

then keep on searching for this hope

hold onto my hand, i wont let u go alone

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is for you jewel.

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Jewel D. Roberts's picture

I rememeber when you wrote this...and just rereading it reminds me of how much i cared for you and still do...but it also reminds me of how good it felt when you told me you loved me and i believed you and how bad it hurt when you broke up with me...and all the emotions i felt and things i said to you that i regret...

Angel Miller's picture

this poem is so sweet

laury2k4's picture

I liked everything about this (especially the star and moon stuff) except the last line

"hold onto my hand, i wont let u go alone"

how about..."hold my hand and you'll never be alone"

Just an idea. Beautiful James. So tender :)

Jewel Danielle Roberts's picture

James I love this poem...you know i do.....everything
about it is so sweet and beautiful!! I Love You!! and I'll
Talk to you later!!*hugs* Jewel

Mary Bibbs's picture

this is awesome james!! i truly love it. its so emotional and deep and i can tell it comes straight from the heart, etc. talk to u onlines. luvs ya ~ maryboo

Jenny Lee's picture

hey this is really good! ill talk to you later (hopefully) love you 10 times more then anything you say! (even though you will never think i do) Jenn Jenn