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red storm
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everythin else Everything slows down
Fury aquatic flames rampage through your veins
skin cold as stone, hard as steel
all merging into a union
A moment, unlike any other
eyes gain that sparkle
movement flows with bounce
yet all in one picture
of a movie that is your life
your time,story,being
this was the instant
You let go
the animal tore out
you lost control
and it all washed over
With a red storm
I'm not sure I'm seeing how everything connects here. It's like a collection of really nice images and words but I just don't understand what they're trying to say and what they have to do with each other. The beginning has this negative connotation and then we get to "eyes gain that sparkle" and it sounds very positive. I don't know James, I'm just not feeling it! I'm lost!
Hmm, I had to read it twice before I understood sorta. Once you read through the lines it's actually really cool. Good job as always ^-^
~Alexia