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Ongoing pain
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Sadness The pain i have cannot be eased
hiding behind every smile, laugh, and joyous moment.
all an act, to keep you pleased.
To keep you from knowing the truth that I feel.
The unrelenting horrors of my mind and emotions.
A movie so real, you can see it playing
behind my eyes,
over and over.
The rain and tears
soaking the scene
of me standing
in darkness
nightmare or dream ?
Blinding fear
The shackles of torment
holding me back
against the flow of the moment.
Stuck
with the only ways to escape
being death
or insanity thats beginning
to take shape.
james...
you're improving SO much. I really really really like this one. However, I do think that between the first and second stanza your style changes. thats all i have to say on this one! and i don't remember seeing any grammatical stuff.
AWESOME JOB!