I walk in darkness and despair, with nothing left for which i care. My dreams are shattered and the tears that i weep, go unseen by anybody as they roll down my icy cold cheecks. Although they speak, the words just fade ,into the darkness as the people parade, through the halls and into class, i feel as though im transparent like glass. Smiles passing without a care , people in this world just arnt fair. Thats why i think im going to take a vacation, to live with hell in eternal damnation. But hey!who knows! maybe youll join? Then we can talk about things on the otherside of the coin. Besides just ourselves and just our looks and go inside others and read them like books. Maybe then i dont quite know but just perhaps we just might know that they to feel as helpless as i ,and the pains they do not show tear them up inside.
hmm, I want to thank you for your honest critiques
Kerr1
"and the pains they do not show tears them up inside"
love
I can relate exactly with that poem, and probably would have put the same thing down into words if my mind didn't die on me all the time. *grins* Good job, I love it.
~Alexia
I would capitalize and wouldn't be proud of hell.