When the clouds part and the sun shines down
upon the girl with the flowered gown
who sings the song of my dreams untold
and in her hand my heart she holds.
like a beautiful ruby big and red
which she'll hold until the day we wed
or otherwise inside i will feel dead,
and mourn the loss of the girl
with my dream in her head.
Hey,
This was the first poem of yours that I ever read and I fell in love with it the second i started reading. All of your writing has such passion and meaning. Teens everywhere can relate to everything that you write. I don't know what I would do without you, I do know that if I wasn't able to talk to you i would probably wanna live under a rock though. Love ya forever, *hugs and kisses*
~karli
James...
i wish i had a bigger vocabulary to describe how i feel, but in layman's terms, it's simply beautiful, emotional, amazing.
That really beautiful.. I really like it ..