Tears sparkling
like falling stars
carressing down
her moonlit face
An expression held
of hopeless question
gazing into space
searching for an answer
from her lover who
had left her side
In attempt to save her life
He went ahead and died
Wow is the only word i can use to discribe this its awsome
this is really beautiful.
i'm really sad somehow right now....but almost comedically? strange...
Wow James, it's amazing how much your writing changes but this one is incredible! I love this style and your word choice, everything about it.