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The life Bank
Start balance: a blank sheet
End balance: how much hurt, how much pain
Tick the boxes
It's up to you how you save
Now save me
Start balance: a blank sheet
End balance: how much hurt, how much pain
Tick the boxes
It's up to you how you save
Now save me
hey, i really like this poem, it's short and to the point.. and it really makes you think. i like the analogy. witty.
I like this one. It has mystery and pain in it. You did a good joy of making the reader wonder and guess. That isn't always a goal, but here, it works well. Super, Kelvin.