This pain inside is killing me
Taking away the very life I live
Destroying friendships
Tearing relationships apart
Killing me
Killing me
This pain inside is numbing me
Every feeling inside is slowly being numbed
I cant feel the pain im causing
The pain im making
Numbing me
Numbing me
This pain inside has left me dead
I don't feel the pain anymore
I don't feel the knife slicing into me
I don't feel the blood coming out
Left me dead
Left me dead
perfect... yeah its a good poem with rich idea and sweet composition of words... the way you did it is nice and heart feeling of course... so I can say that you are a good poet with sweet poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?