Killing me

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This pain inside is killing me

Taking away the very life I live

Destroying friendships

Tearing relationships apart

Killing me

Killing me



This pain inside is numbing me

Every feeling inside is slowly being numbed

I cant feel the pain im causing

The pain im making

Numbing me

Numbing me



This pain inside has left me dead

I don't feel the pain anymore

I don't feel the knife slicing into me

I don't feel the blood coming out

Left me dead

Left me dead

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Afzal Shauq's picture

perfect... yeah its a good poem with rich idea and sweet composition of words... the way you did it is nice and heart feeling of course... so I can say that you are a good poet with sweet poetic feelings and thoughts... hope my poetry has also that much strenth to make way to your heart and brain to capture as this poem of yours has done to mine.... wish you good luck peotry friend... with a hope you will go through my work too..to know if its heart touchig or not?