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confusion
searching for what?
to ease my mind...
your there and im hear
accepting long distant phone calls
seeing you face on a computer screen
it just not enough for me
sitting in my sudays best
waiting to hear the announcement
the anticipation of what is to come
reading your wrong doings on a
piece of paper
this is not the guy i know
where to place you in my picture
working every night
trying to show'em what i've got
trying to not to let this situation
get to my commission
it hasnt been long
and were already back at square on
gotta release this tension
thru these keys
i dont understand
as a young child we all stood
in line playing little soldiers behind our flag
stating pledge before our day was to begin
now how did the law of the government become our enemy
right or wrong society is to just weather or
not who is and who isnt humane who should see the outside world and who shouldnt
really twisted with my feeling
as becoming a dancer to get my earnings thru life
seems as tho my perception of what is right and wrong not
officers come in and out of the club tipping dollars trying to cop a feel
seems really twisted and yet u sit back and jude others for their faults but when you feel as if society's eyes are close those who are there to protect the innocent are on the same level of those slanggin drugs lost in the confusion of our society
Your poem has much to say
Your poem has much to say about modern day life, it can be so confusing, and it's a shame it's so violent too. Where did civilization go to? Are we losing the plot etc? All stated very well in your poem, it' s content makes you think. I enjoyed reading your poem athough with concern.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57