Notice to Vacate

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Poetry Challenge

Notice to Vacate



A visitor to my isolation

stirred my thoughts.

Primed my mind and

encouraged my soul.

Suggested serving you notice

to vacate my heart.

Typical, he was not.

So, remove the sliver

that once pinned yours to mine.

Let the rain fall

like sparkling gems,

refreshing liquid,

to cleanse my heart

and fashion anew.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Ten word challenge from Jessica.  Words:  
notice, vacate, isolate, prime, typical, sliver, gems, refreshing, liquid, fashioned.

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I really like this different outlook. It's funny how two people will have the same words with such different ideas. lol Great job.

Jessica