WOW! I was working on a possible topic and title for my next poem, when an idea similar to "The Oasis" came to mind. The only problem I had was the vague suspicion that you had already used that title for a poem with the common theme of a "prince charming" encounter - albeit this prince carries you off on a camel. You have done such a great job that I dare not attempt to create another piece that will only end in mediocrity by comparison. This poem was such a delight that I was enticed to the point of overwhelming wanderlust! Hey, Kim, Ya think there's a veiled "fatima" out there in your desert waiting for me? Heck! Your engaging poem makes me want to go hitch up my camel and go find out! Well Done!
I LOVE IT!!! This one is great! You have outdone yourself, girl. Hey, I've gone gourd crazy. I KNOW those aren't gourds in the trees but that's all I can think of. I really like the music, Kim.
Jessica
WOW! I was working on a possible topic and title for my next poem, when an idea similar to "The Oasis" came to mind. The only problem I had was the vague suspicion that you had already used that title for a poem with the common theme of a "prince charming" encounter - albeit this prince carries you off on a camel. You have done such a great job that I dare not attempt to create another piece that will only end in mediocrity by comparison. This poem was such a delight that I was enticed to the point of overwhelming wanderlust! Hey, Kim, Ya think there's a veiled "fatima" out there in your desert waiting for me? Heck! Your engaging poem makes me want to go hitch up my camel and go find out! Well Done!
I LOVE IT!!! This one is great! You have outdone yourself, girl. Hey, I've gone gourd crazy. I KNOW those aren't gourds in the trees but that's all I can think of. I really like the music, Kim.
Jessica