14 October 2003 - 7:12pm — Darlene Brooks (not verified)
I really like this poem.I know how you feel in most of it. Still I am curious how you get those exellant special effects in it.I was just wondering because I can't add sounds(music),pictures,or even change my font on each poem.So I was just wondering but it's ok if you're busy or something.I suppose it doesn't really matter all that much.But I just wanted you to know that I do enjoy your poems.And they are greatly appreciated by another writer.
-A Fan
24 February 2003 - 1:25pm — Judy Costea (not verified)
Kim,
This is so cute, I too have a husband who calls me mommie. I finally got tired of hearing this in bed and told him, If you want to sleep with your mommie. go back home to her. But i am not your mommie and this is not very romantic in bed. so lose the mommie, or lose something else...LOL...
Very well said...
Judy
"Have one" what!!?? Husband, name, or other?? Some things we miss for a moment......others can't be found even looking back over a decade. Has he simply snuggled you lately?? That's the first thing to go. Nice work, again; thought-provoking. Teddy
"Poe" I'm not, nor "Rich" am I, but I'll be famous, b'ye and b'ye !
I really like this poem.I know how you feel in most of it. Still I am curious how you get those exellant special effects in it.I was just wondering because I can't add sounds(music),pictures,or even change my font on each poem.So I was just wondering but it's ok if you're busy or something.I suppose it doesn't really matter all that much.But I just wanted you to know that I do enjoy your poems.And they are greatly appreciated by another writer.
-A Fan
Kim,
This is so cute, I too have a husband who calls me mommie. I finally got tired of hearing this in bed and told him, If you want to sleep with your mommie. go back home to her. But i am not your mommie and this is not very romantic in bed. so lose the mommie, or lose something else...LOL...
Very well said...
Judy
~ Well come over here Mama, hand me my runnin shoes ~ ---Eric Sardinas
But seriously, very clever how you put this!
Nice write Kim:)
YES!!! Good job!
"Have one" what!!?? Husband, name, or other?? Some things we miss for a moment......others can't be found even looking back over a decade. Has he simply snuggled you lately?? That's the first thing to go. Nice work, again; thought-provoking. Teddy
"Poe" I'm not, nor "Rich" am I,
but I'll be famous, b'ye and b'ye !