Something Missing

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There is something missing from my day.
I've looked  but I cannot find it;
an elusive  mysterous  quality;
altogether pleasant and comfortable.

Senses tuned  an eyebrow raised;
half expecting something -- but what?

Wait; a breeze wafts through  
pleasant and comfortable  but....
not the same; somehow empty.
Distracted  annoyed.....
I return to my work.

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There is someone missing from my day.....
Looking won't help  for I have stepped away.
The banter and happiness  out of reach,
but comfort and joy in the distance wait.

A thought enters my mind
like a *soft* touch on the shoulder
Did I hear my name on the wind?
A playful  teasing voice?  
mimic'd by the rustling leaves.

Annoyed and impatient....  
my return home delayed.

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There is something missing from my day.
There is someone missing from my day.....
I've looked  but I cannot find it;
Looking won't help  for I have stepped away.
an elusive  mysterous  quality;
the banter and happiness  out of reach
altogether pleasant and comfortable.
but comfort and joy in the distance wait.

Senses tuned  an eyebrow raised;
A thought enters my mind
half expecting something -- but what?
like a *soft* touch on the shoulder

Wait; a breeze wafts through
Did I hear my name on the wind?
pleasant and comfortable  but....
a playful  teasing voice
not the same; somehow empty.
mimic'd by the rustling leaves

Distracted  annoyed.....
Annoyed and impatient....
I return to my work.
my return home delayed.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This  (top poem) was written by my friend, Phil.      
The middle section is (my poem) an echo to his poem.  Although they can stand alone, they  also work together  (below)

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I wrote the first part of this? GOSH! I don't even recall writting it! How..... wierd! Kim you are a 'master' with words from the heart. I'm glad I know you.
Phil