-Big Daddy Smooth

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Big Daddy Smooth







Big Daddy Smooth

he's got it in the groove.

Brothers in enforcement, can't figure why

all the ladies want this guy.



The ladies love his compassion

his kindness and concern.

A trait he comes by honestly

one that all should learn.



He's knowledgeable and exciting.

He's witty and he's keen.

When the law is called to do the job,

they ask, "Is David on the scene?"



This job can be adventureous

and it has it's dangers there.

But he does his job sincerely

and treats everybody fair.



When he returns nightly to his castle,

his own ladyfaire awaits.

And his children, who adore him

greet him at the castle gate.







Author's Notes/Comments: 

Another, 'words from a friend' poem.  A twist this time.  These 12 words describing David aka 'Big Daddy Smooth', came from his fellow cop.  Even his buddies think he's quite  a guy.

Big Daddy Smooth, compassion, kindness, concern, honest, knowledgeable, exciting, witty, keen, adventerous, adore, sincere.

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Sounds like a super guy. Hope you gave him a copy of this. He'll probably blush like a little girl. James