Alive In The Death Of Myself

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~*~ Vampires ~*~

a glimse of light and you're gone again

the passion makes me weak so I succumb to you



crimson lips and persistant tongue

your icy gaze takes me over



I see through your wicked intentions, and it excites me

so claim me now and take my innocence



come quick and steal my essense, my very heart

and introduce to me the night and all of its casualties



vulnerable neck, a place to draw strength...

now feed to me your everlasting youth



it rolls off my tongue like the sweet nectar of immortality

and imparts its beauty...its chaos here in my fading soul



falling to the floor I know what you've done

but we must be patient, the change is delicate



yellow eyes are hungrily darting around now

I know I must find a soul to sustain me



so I emerse myself in the night and search for my prey

knowing that this is the end and I'll never be the same

but I've never felt more alive...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i got my inspiration from the movie interview with a vampire...but i just like writing bout vampires lately...lol

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mpr8888@yahoo.com's picture

even though this idea may not be 100% original, your point of view is. i love the details, utilizing adjectives for emphasis. you pay close attention to your subject, therefore relaying to the reader who knows nothing, everything essential to the topic. as a bonus, the mood is in tune with the material. slow, an almost mysterious atmosphere completes your words. i am impressed.


MR